[Emily]: 252.Miscellaneous Material.Twisted and Beautiful

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2006-01-29 22:43:22

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[Emily]: 252.Miscellaneous Material.Lips and Iron Nails

Keywords:

Twisted and Beautiful

Genre:

Comedy

Style:

short story

License:

Free for reading

Type: Short Story; Misc.
Date: Unknown
Progress: Complete
Note: This story is confusing even to me, but it is most certainly among one of my favorites, just because of its complicated mystery. Should I add anymore to it, I fear this story would be a hopeless, limp, lifeless thing.

Background: A story I wrote on just three words. "Twisted and beautiful." My favorite line and something I've taken as my trademark phrase.

About: A girl who walks on graves, beckoning for ghosts to appear. But then one she doesn't know comes out of his shell...

Updated as of January 29th, 2006. I made Eli's appearance different and fixed some grammar mistakes.

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2005-12-31 Kuzco: This is a weird one. No wonder it's on "Miscellaneous Material" I wouldn't be able to cathegorize it either. Anyways, it's a pleasant and intriguing read but not that much to add or criticise. I liked the theme and the way it was developed but failed to understand any deep meaning to it, if there was any. Still, I enjoyed reading it. :)

2005-12-31 Emily: Thank you! I suppose this story was 'more for me, not for you' sort of thing. It's about all laid out there. The girl and the ghost had a past together... she didn't remember it. He made her remember it, because he didn't want his memory to be erased from her.

2006-01-31 SleepingDragon: Jumping over here from A better way.

I have to say up front, I like it quite a bit as is, even though the ending sort of doesn't feel like an ending (more like this is part of something larger)

If I would suggest to add anything, I think I would say...flashbacks. Nothing major and huge as to negate the fact that she doesn't remember how he died etc. Just little twinges;painful glimpses in the past that she can't bear.

2006-08-02 Burning Inside: Wow another astounding story Emily I loved this one so much. Its Intruiging I love the past that they had together, the way you included it everything. I wouldn't change anything for this story, it is amazing, I can't wait to see what you favorite story is, I'll probably orgasm reading it(not really)