[Ravendust]: 343.Stolen Freedoms | Rating: 0.00 |
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2006-06-01 Aeolynn: Awesome! Amazing! *continues on with big words* Stupendous! LOL
2006-08-31 Emily: "However, nearly three hundred years after the interstellar wars had taken place; it was found that a small group of the people had managed to escape their inevitable demise." That semi-colon would be better as a comma.
"hey sent a small well armed expedition up to investigate the moon."... I think it's well-armed, but I'm not too sure.
Very well-written, however. Interesting, for the most part.
2006-08-31 Ravendust: heh, thanks ^^ >_< my computer has a very sucky spell-check tool... So I tend to miss things like these.